tolkiens legendarium - Is the ring poem slightly inaccurate? Who wrote it?

It is clear that the three Elven rings were not made by Sauron. The inscription on the One Ring, made by Sauron, was in some way related to its power, even if we cannot say if it was by fancy (it makes for a nice trick :) ), if it was required by the spell or whatever: it is just like that. What is clear is that when Sauron put it on and the Elves understood the plot, a lot of action started rolling.

Now my point is: the ring poem (while being great, of course) seems slightly inaccurate.

We know that it is a verse "long known in Elven-lore", as Gandalf explains to Frodo in Shadows of the Past.

Was it written by the Elves? Why am I even asking, since Elves clearly love poetry and songs? Because:

1. It explicitly mentions, at least two times, the (translation of the) evil inscription on the Ring.



2. It is describing the actions and the purposes of the Lord of the Rings: but the Lord only gave out the Seven and the Nine, but not the Three which were exceptional: he had power over them because they were "made" with the same techniques but he had not planned them, they were made independently and one can imagine that they "caught him by surprise".

So, isn't it a bit strange that the verse long known in Elven lore seems to place the Three on the same footing, as if the purpose of the One Ring had been from start to rule them all? Isn't a bit strange that Elves used for their verses the very words of the spell (which were surely regarded as very evil: in our world it would be similar to quote in a poem words spoken by some dictator...)?

P.S. Yes, it is conceivable that Sauron would make some rings for the Elves, to keep them under his control: but this still had not happened and things went in a different direction.

Answer

That's a very good question! My suspicion is that the inscription is of Sauron's doing, but the full verse was created separately.

The full verse in question:

Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky,

Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,

Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,

One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne

In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.

One Ring to rule them all. One Ring to find them,

One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them

In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.

Gandalf mentions Sauron's forging of the Ring and the inscription mentioned as being heard:

Out of the Black Years come the words that the Smiths of Eregion heard, and knew that they had been betrayed:

One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them, One Ring to bring them all and in the Darkness bind them.

At this point the inscription lines exist. We can deduce that the rest of the verse did not yet exist, as the Seven and Nine were only doled out once these rings were seized from the Elves - after the One Ring was forged:

As soon as Sauron set the One Ring upon his finger they were aware of him; and they knew him, and perceived that he would be master of them, and of an that they wrought. Then in anger and fear they took off their rings. ... he came against them with open war, demanding that all the rings should be delivered to him, since the Elven-smiths could not have attained to their making without his lore and counsel.

Sauron gathered into his hands all the remaining Rings of Power; and he dealt them out. ... Seven rings he gave to the Dwarves; but to Men he gave nine, for Men proved in this matter as in others the readiest to his will.

Given that timeline it becomes obvious that the rest was written at a later date. Who by, it isn't revealed. It may have been the Elves, Sauron or some other person on either side. Just because the verse was "long known in Elven-lore" does not mean that it was written by an Elf - just that they knew of it.

Since Elves who were around at the forging of the Ring still lived in Middle Earth (Cirdan, Celeborn, Galadriel, Elrond and potentially others), the suspicion would be that they would know who wrote the verse if it had been composed by an Elf. This person isn't revealed, but as Francesco pointed out, whoever wrote the verse would need to be somewhat cognisant of Ring-lore, i.e. knowing the verse heard by the Elven-smiths of Eregion, knowing of the existence of the Three, Seven and Nine and their purpose. That would limit it to either an Elf, one of the Wise (i.e. an Istari) or Sauron or one of his close lieutenants, if they were so inclined to write poetry in their spare time.